Refn *work-in-progress

I’m going to direct the outcome of this relationship:

 

We fade in:

 

Ext. Stadium Step—wide shot

 

And shouldering the burden for too long…he collapses…

 

Cut to:

Bloody-aftermath bedrooms

Cut to:

Barking shins

Cut to:

Panning eyelids (always upwards)

Cut to:

Fallout shelters

Cut to:

Overrated-love

Cut to:

Ephemeral teasing

Cut to:

Portions of fecal waste left displayed on an altar

Cut to:

God-echo

Cut to:

a hero

Cut to:

Scorpions and jackets

Cut to:

Spirit, O Spirit

Cut to:

Slow chases

Cut to:

Dashboard wasteland

Cut to:

Backseat-love

Cut to:

Deep sigh

Cut to:

Condemned, drift-less stranger-apparent

Cut to:

A sneeze gone awry

Cut to:

Coffee on balustrade

Cut to:

Ybor City

Cut to:

V for Vendetta showing

Cut to:

Twin Towers five-years later

Cut to:

Blackberry rows

Cut to:

Black fingerprints

Cut to:

Parking lots (soon enough that is)

Cut to:

Int. Burned-out Bedroom—close-up

 

Members Only: until otherwise stated…

 

Smash-cut to:

Slow Karma

Cut to:

Broken notes

Cut to:

New orgasms

Cut to:

Overhead, and by your side

Cut to:

Wet fingertips

Cut to:

Home-made bombs

Cut to:

Rolled-up sleeves

Cut to:

Distances, while I watch you open it

Cut to:

a new American Low

Cut to:

“Platano” playing

Cut to:

Fingers through hair

Cut to:

Painting, as black as I know it shows

Cut to:

Broken Cadillacs

Panting, as they paint us black

Cut to:

the unknown

Cut to:

Ext. Parking Lot—continuous

 

Drunk outside a theme park (the rebellion is now over)…

 

Cut to:

Final coverage

Cut to:

A Camera

Cut to:

B Camera

Cut to:

Master shot

Cut to:

Magic hour

Cut to:

Static at the knee

Cut to:

Breaking up

Cut to:

Final shots

Cut to:

Sunsets as flowers blooming in me

Cut to:

Bottles at crutches

Cut to:

Peg legs wet with condensation

Cut to:

Limbs as we’d have them

Cut to:

Old orgasms

Cut to:

Pliant ventricles

Cut to:

the Pretty Odd

Cut to:

Last-chance concerts

Cut to:

Comedians

Cut to:

Pictures I’ll never see

Cut to:

 

Ext. the film ends—continuous

 

All that’s left is my needs…

 

We fade out:

 

Black screen.

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